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Ganz nach oben - Acoustic Versions   Songwriter:  Carsten Kollmeier
It’s a long way that you have gone - by doin’ it step by step<br>standing still at every corner - considering what’s right or wrong<br> there’s so many things you’ve done - and most of them where right<br>but sometimes you ask yourself what for?<br><br> You got further, moved along - picked directions one by one<br>out of all those sideways and shortcuts and deadends - you finally found your way <br>but there where people you caused headaches - just by trying to hurt no one<br>and still you ask yourself what for?<br><br><div>cause you got bruises and scratches and itches and pain<br>and just by trying not to hurt someone you hurt them again<br>people are getting complicated, even if you try to explain<br>is it you or is it them that they don’t understand? <br><br></div><div>There where times you wanted someone - didn’t know how to get along<br>and the other times you where wanted by someone but didn’t know it - acting like a fool<br>doing silly things by trying to impress<br>but nonetheless you ask yourself what for <br><br></div><div>cause you got bruises and scratches and itches and pain<br>and just by trying not to hurt someone you hurt them again<br>people are getting complicated, even if you try to explain<br>is it you or is it them that they don’t understand? <br><br> But this time you didnt move at all,<br>tried not to breathe, tried not to change anything,<br>because things could get worse, what they did anyway:<br>and while you’re fixing everything, everything running away,<br>and you realize you've got to go the other way,<br><br>still thinking: „Hey, hey<br>baby, I wanna<br>kno-ohoho-oh-ow, if you be my<br>girl“<br><br><br></div>
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